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Water Cutout

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Inspired by the thing Synfull did with the papermotes last year, I thought I'd try drawing a few things to print out, cut out, laminate and stick on my walls at uni. The twirls there were born of neccessity - I ran out of paperspace while sketching ><

Ignoring the twirls, what do you think?

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changed the hideous twirls into something else. in terms of feedback, what do you think of the hairstyle? did i shade the headband ok? any general comments? or suggestiosn for something to replace the splash there?

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Well well, first of all I like the pic. Her pose is very fresh and young.
I like her hair, you definitely did something different and it looks great :)
Plus, the shade looks good too!

On the other hand, let me tell you, I think you should be a little more careful with the line art. It looks a bit sloppy. If you have problems with keeping a straight line without maybe shaking your hand or going another direction (like for example in the breast area), I recommend you use a French Curve or Pistolete (if you don't know that it is then look for images in Google.)

Last but not least, I'm not crazy in love with the splashes because you can easily see the difference between the drawing and the water. I cannot think about anything in particular right now, but maybe if you used some brushes in Photoshop it would look better and much more natural.

Keep up the good work! ;)



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